Everything looks good here. Your lines are bold and there's an interesting amount of implied movement. (As illustrated by the turning of each character's hair) This appears to be a rather formidable team-up or, if not, match up as either one could easily give the other a run for her money!
If this was meant to stay a simple illustration, that is fine. However, I see this piece benefiting from a bit of color or even some more value. Each character appears posed in their own way, almost as two separate compositions or solo images. This would be where color could come into play to join the two a little better.
All in all, I like what you have done here, showing the two in their dynamic natures. Almost looks like a perfect setup for a comic book cover!
marvelous inking job, I especially like how you did the hair , thats an area where I usually make alot of mistakes when inking, any technique you use to get such nicely curved lines with a pen?
Yeah, there is rulers you can use to give you a real nice precision when you’re outlining curves, I use one named “French curve”, I’m not sure if that is the name for it in English, but it looks like this one: [link]
Your lines are bold and there's an interesting amount of implied movement. (As illustrated by the turning of each character's hair)
This appears to be a rather formidable team-up or, if not, match up as either one could easily give the other a run for her money!
If this was meant to stay a simple illustration, that is fine. However, I see this piece benefiting from a bit of color or even some more value. Each character appears posed in their own way, almost as two separate compositions or solo images. This would be where color could come into play to join the two a little better.
All in all, I like what you have done here, showing the two in their dynamic natures. Almost looks like a perfect setup for a comic book cover!
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